Proximity (Proximity #1)
Author: M.A. George
YA Fantasy/Sci-Fi
2 1/2 out of 5 Stars
Synopsis
Dr. Palta Capal would be a typical American career woman…if only she were human. She has found her calling in this world as a physician. It’s an ideal outlet for her compassionate spirit...and unearthly healing powers. Palta may spend her nights rereading Jane Austen novels, but she deliberately avoids pursuing her own love story. Human men — attractive as they may be — inevitably grow old and wither, leaving her to grieve in solitude. Frankly, no one has seemed worth the torment. Enter Eric Moran, the intensely attractive and enigmatic new coworker on the scene. With his quiet confidence and warm smile, he manages to draw Palta’s attention. Little does she know that he, too, holds a secret…one that will propel them both into an escalating collision of two worlds.
Review By Lauren:
Palta Capal and her family have been living as United States
citizens the span of Palta’s life after her father, mother, and sister left
their home planet of Ononti. Palta and
her sister have kept their heritage a secret with the help of their father’s
ability to influence others. They both
work in fields that they can put their own abilities to good use. Being a healer, Palta has found her niche in
the medical field. She enjoys her work
and lives a non-eventful life up until the day she finds her handsome coworker,
Eric Moran, dying on the floor of their lab.
Palta has no choice but risk exposing her family for what they really
are in order to save him.
Proximity has a plethora of good qualities. It is a science fiction book that I would
recommend for young readers because there is a lack of sex and profanity. The Capal family is living the American
Dream. They are home owners,
hardworking, and have good morals and ethics, things that I believe children
should be exposed to in literature. The
storyline is easy to follow and is not very complex; anyone could understand
the premise and plot.
With that being said I would not recommend this book to an
adult audience. I think most woman would
find the progression of the romance between Palta and Eric hard to
believe. This seemingly highly
intelligent woman, a doctor even, gets into this whirlwind relationship and
swept into his families mess all within a matter of days after saving his life,
jeopardizing her family’s well-being and exposing them all to a menace back on
Ononti. What? After all the claims Palta makes of how
important her family and their secrecy is over their hundreds of years on
Earth, she throws it all away in a week?!
I cannot see the logic in that, even within the sci-fi, non-fictional
realm. If I had any say in the editorial
process that had to have taken place prior to Proximity being released, I would
have highly recommended the author give at least one ounce of definitive proof
that Morans are who they claim to be. I
would have also asked her to insist that Eric ask Palta out on a date, buy the
woman a drink even, before he asked for her and her family to help him save the
Earth from the complete annihilation of the human race at the hands of a
deranged dictator from Ononti.